9/24/10

The character that I will tell you about is my Main character best friend. Natalia is one of Max three best friends. Every time something strange happen, she cry. That is one way she express her self. Another way is loving, she's a lovely girl, she care a lot about her three best friends. When Ray was setting the house on fire, Natalia don't care what happen to her, she just trying to help her friend. Even though she past out, she still trying to help her friend. But something magic happen. The rain was very hard when Natalia past out. Natalia express her self through love. It is important because, when some one do what they do, can tell other people what kind of person is that character.

9/20/10

In my book, the author did a great job describing the main character in my book. He describe every single detail that you need to know about the main character. The first character, my author describe his age first. My second character, the author describe the looks first.

Thursday september 9, 2010

Ray is one of the monster in the game, he is now trying to kill Max and his friend. Now Max and hisfriend is trap in the fire, Ray set the hole place on fire and now Max and his friend have to get out of the fire and save Ernie. Ernie is having a asthma atack, thats make the escape even harder.

Sep. 3/2010

I am still reading The Revenge Of The Shadow King. Right now my main charcter is on a special diet, because his doctor said he have to start eating healthy, otherwise he will have lots of stress. so yeah. A new character in my book! His name is Harley, first I thought that Harley is a girl. Harley express him selves by eating. He eat a lot. He said that he eat when he is sad, mad, happy and when he is normal. What a fat so. That is what happen so far.