Friday, September 3, 2010
Sep. 3/2010
I am still reading The Revenge Of The Shadow King. Right now my main charcter is on a special diet, because his doctor said he have to start eating healthy, otherwise he will have lots of stress. so yeah. A new character in my book! His name is Harley, first I thought that Harley is a girl. Harley express him selves by eating. He eat a lot. He said that he eat when he is sad, mad, happy and when he is normal. What a fat so. That is what happen so far.
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Wat Up Huy. I think your writing is good but gave some examples. On your character talk more about what He/She does. Describe what the main character is eating. You might need to put his name. Like for ex. Right now my main character is on special diet, Carter. Because ......
ReplyDeleteAnd don't be mean to the character.
It's good though. Keep trying.
By Chuck.